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Plebbly
Posts : 10 Join date : 2010-11-06 Age : 28
| Subject: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:49 am | |
| My Character, i have never really done things like this so yeah, don't expect much XD ______________________________________________________________________
Name: Zarieru Kugua Nickname: "Blade" Age:15 Gender:Male Height:193cm Weight:82kg Group:N/A Reputation:0 Rank:D Affiliation:Light Blood-type:B Likes:Slicing up enemies Dislikes:Losing Fears: Mages Physical Description:Brown Hair, Blue eyes, Large Broad Stature, Muscular. Light Tan Magic Keywords: Shou Ki or Magic? Magic Clothing:Baggy Black pants, Dark Blue T-shirt with 1 ripped sleeve Accessories:Onyx Ring on right index finger. White wristband with Adauchi in black Extra:Broadsword Tattoo down left arm Picture: Spoiler: Characters picture goes here!
Personality Brute who using no skill but offense. Humored by the suffering of his enemies and distraught by defeat. a Generally serious guy who finds humour in not much, only occasions with his uncle can bring a smile to his face. he is an often tired and is not willing to go out when offered. Mention of his parents sends him into a rage to cover the depression.
History As a child, Zarieru was brought up in the normal world, though his mother was a mage. he was pretty normal except for his obsession with knifes that brought worry to his teachers. at the age of 8, walking home with his parents, they were both knocked to the ground by strong gust of wind. blood seeped from their heads as Zarieru watched them die. petrified by the sight, it was minutes before he turned to notice a man in black standing at the end of the street. Another strong gust forced zarieru's eyes shut, and the man disappeared. with the image of the man imprinted in his mind, and the motive of revenge, he swore to hunt that man down if it was the last thing he did.
Class: Swordsman
Weaponry/Equipment Broadsword handle with a summoned blade
Stats – 45 [You have 45 SP to distribute among these statistics.] Strength:15 Accuracy:10 Endurance:8 Speed:8 Intelligence:4
Stat Points Earned: 0 Jewels Earned: 500,000 (starting amount)
Sources: Leave this blank, until you make a modification in the history section.
Magic Name: Electricity Magic Magic Type: Elemental/Offensive TP/KP Earned: 0 Magic Description: The ability to morph Electricity to suit the user. Techniques:10/10
Star Domination - (5) Type: Offensive Incantation: hoshi Range: 30m Effect: Distracts the enemy with a stray explosion before striking with 3 blasts from the end of his blade. These blasts look like shooting stars hence the "Star" Domination
Storm Blade - (5) Type: Offensive/Defensive incantation: arashi Range: 2-12metres Effect: Creates a weak electrical barrier around the user when the blade is or fires a lighting bolt from the end of the blade that dissipates after a certain length
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Umibouzu
Posts : 2815 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:54 am | |
| Question: What kind of magic do you use?
You appear to be a Magic Swordsman, but none of your abilities are really used with a sword, and have no coherance. (Explosions & Electrical Barrier)
Both are possible, just the have to stem from the magic blade... also Fill out the Magic Descriptor.
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Alberio
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2010-08-07 Age : 32 Location : Ohio
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:55 am | |
| It appears that you have left off half the [b] code for the character. Also you may want to seperate out your history and personality. After that, we can begin disscussing the content of your character. |
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Plebbly
Posts : 10 Join date : 2010-11-06 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:58 am | |
| i dont know, i only got into this last night because of william but for 1, with the lightning blast thing, it comes out of the sword, and if i cant attack at a range, im completely screwed against mages and stuff, so i have Star Domination. |
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Alberio
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2010-08-07 Age : 32 Location : Ohio
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 1:29 am | |
| *sigh* Please use the proper bolded code it is just easier for everyone. Srry if I am nit-picking but it really is.
Please tie the magic abilities in more with your sword them, fill out the magic tyoe template (this is the magic you are best at though you can still learn other magic with no penalty).
MUCH longer personality. Tell us if he is generally happy, said ,serious, angry that kind of stuff, not the generic "sad if loses happy if wins" cause that is sortof the same for everyone.
Also please give us a better indication as to what his life before his parents were killed (maybe tell why someone may have wated them dead) and what he did afterwards (seek a master to earn the ways of the sword? Enter into the seedy underbelly of the magic world. Also were his parents mages or normal? Was he born in the magic world or the normal world? Just some ideas to help you flush out your character because should you decide to get a pactio, its powers and abilities will be based not only on your skills, but also your personality. |
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Plebbly
Posts : 10 Join date : 2010-11-06 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 1:45 am | |
| im not sure what to do with the magic type part.
but thanks for helping me :) |
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Alberio
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2010-08-07 Age : 32 Location : Ohio
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:17 am | |
| It's more like the type of magic you specialize in. It could be generic magic or it could be something unique such as magia erebia (though honestly you can't get that just yet). Or rather it's the kind of magic you are best at and how you use it (like how Negi specializes in wind magic) or something like that. Try looking at the approved characters and look at the magic they use and try and base your magic off of that from there. |
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Plebbly
Posts : 10 Join date : 2010-11-06 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:24 am | |
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Alberio
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2010-08-07 Age : 32 Location : Ohio
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:26 am | |
| Sort of but not quite. I'm probably not explaining it too well. So you want this guy to be a sword wielder right. So are there any abilities or techniques you would like him to have? |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:16 am | |
| You can't have a rank 6 technique until you have 10 intelligence. Also for magic description, say what that lightning can do. |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:28 pm | |
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Alberio
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2010-08-07 Age : 32 Location : Ohio
| Subject: Re: uuhh... Character thingy i guess... Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:25 pm | |
| 2/2 approval and welcome to the forum :)
This topic is resolved and therefore is closed |
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