Account Name: Kagami 737
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Name: Kagami Kaguya
Nickname: The Psycho Vamp
Age: Unknown, looks 16
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 148 lbs.
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Neutral
Blood-type: O
Likes: Combat, the sight of blood
Dislikes: Peaceful situations, cute things
Fears: Defeat
Physical Description: Kagami is very pale, with a muscular build. Hey eyes are crimson red, as is her hair. There is something about her that unsettles the nerves of even good friends of hers, if she had them.
Magic Keywords: N/A
Ki or Magic? Ki!
Clothing: Kagami is fairly flexible about clothes, going for comfort and utility. Other than that anything goes, but she has a tendency to wear black and red.
Accessories: A 'dog tag' chain with a small thin tin on it instead of the dog tag. She tends to use this to hold small items.
Extra: Her arms and legs have small burn and cut scars all over them, a hint that even before she was a vampire she led a violent life.
Picture:

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Personality
Kagami is very violent, sparing no use of profanity or violence. If you manage to endure her attacks long enough, you might gain her trust. She will still want to duel with you on occasion, but if you get in over your head and need help she will defend you to the end. There is one thing no one has known about her for quite a while because she's kept it secret - when she gets down to it, Kagami is an avid shopper.

History
Kagami has blocked out all memory of her life before she became a vampire, but has been as such about 200 years. While she can survive on animal blood, she has only done that when nessacary. She has intentionally looked for fights whenever possible, whether a person wants to test their strength or hire her as an assassin she has not cared. But she has not always been trustworthy in those deals. When not fighting, she has occasionally gone on a major shopping spree that left her broke. Heck, that's why she's not loaded now.

Class Custom Fighter Class (Good with "Psycho weapons", not so good with other weapons)

Weaponry/Equipment Chainsaw, Cleaver, Knifes, Molotov cocktail, buckler (All those kept in a 'space pocket' which she maintains through her Ki), mini laptop, whatever she has on her from any recent shopping spree, holdout pistol.

Stats – 62
Strength: 15
Accuracy: 11
Endurance: 13
Speed: 12
Intelligence: 11

Stat Points Earned: 0|16
Jewels Earned: 2,200,000

Sources:

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Skills & Disciplines: Advanced wilderness survival, hundreds of years combat experience, Mallet Space!

Magic Name: N/A
Magic Type: N/A
TP/KP Earned: 13/13
Magic Description: N/A
Techniques: 23/23

Fire Spray - Rank 4
Type: Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: cone, 100 ft long and 40 feet wide
Effect: Sends a bunch of flaming knives out in a cone in front of Kagami.

Fire Sheild - Rank 4
Type: Supplementary
Incantation: N/A
Range: Melee
Effect: The metal buckler Kagami has is covered in flames, and becomes very painful to the touch of anyone else... If one maintains contact with it long enough they could catch on fire.

Chainsaw block - Rank 4
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Melee!
Effect: Blocks a weapon and from the rotating chain, damages the other weapon. If a preson attacked with her feet or fists, this injures them badly.

Cleaver Decapitating Twist - Rank 5
Type: Offensive (Finishing move!)
Incantation: N/A
Range: Melee
Effect: The cleaver is twisted in such a way that it severs any limbs (Including the neck) that it strikes. If a person blocks or parrys, their sheild or weapon is often severely damaged.

Ignition Spark - Rank 3
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Incantation: N/A
Range: Finger's touch
By touching somethign flammable Kagami can ignite it. Unfortunately there is always a warning sign and a 1-second delay between when Kagami uses it and the object catches on fire. The warning signs only appear when Kagami is emotional.

Ranged Ignition Spark - Rank 3
Type: offensive/Supplementary
Incantation: N/A
Range: 15 feet
Effect: A white hot spark is emmited from Kagami's middle finger as she flips the bird, and the spark ignites any flammable object it touches.

You need to write more for your personality and history you also forgot this part

Magic Name: (Self-Explanatory)
Magic Type: (Elemental, Offensive, Defensive, Supportive etc.)
TP/KP Earned: How much TP you've earned from missions.
Magic Description: (What exactly does your magic do?)
Techniques: (used/maximum)

(Name of technique) - (Rank - How strong the attack is, depeneds on the rank. Whatever rank the technique is, is how much it takes out of your techniques/magic stock from above.)
Type: (Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Other)
Incantation: (When not profficient in a spell, you need to use the incantation to get it to full power)
Range: (How far the attack goes.)
Effect: (What the Technique does.)

Since you're planning on making a Ki user you can just right N/A next to the parts about magic but you still need to fill out the

TP/KP Earned

and

Techniques (used number of points/ maximum number of points.)

I also agree with the longer history and personality. Please explain what she is like when she isn't obbsessing about fighting and provide a general idea of what she has done in the 200 years since she has been a vampire.

Edited. Also could you give me a better idea how the stats work?

Instead of "D-Rank", you write how strong the technique/spell is with a number. The higher the number, the stronger the spell. Check here:

https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/rules-and-regulations-f17/spell-and-technique-system-t278.htm

The highest rank your character can achieve is rank 5 techniques, as you only have 5 intelligence. So, you'll have to distribute 10 technique points within your 4 techniques.

Lastly, I think "Mallet Space" is more of a "Skills & Disciplines", since it seems like it's always active and such. I recommend you to move it to Skills and Disciplines, as you'll have more room for techniques, too.

Edited once again. And I saw the stats comparison... >.< Her accuracy needs to be adjusted. I hate this, but I think I might take a bit out of endurance... Or should I take in out of strength... hmmm. Let's go with endurance.

Techniques: 4/??

Should be: Techniques: 10/10

Fixed. Thought I missed something, thanks.

It looks good to me, but I didn't take the best of looks. So, 1/2 approval.

If there's anything wrong, another moderator will find it, but I don't think there's anything wrong.

Wait, TP/KP Earned should be: 0|0

Whoops, stupid comp was acting up.

1/2 approval, again.

2/2 approval

This topic is resolved is therefore closed