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Kageryu Shiroeki
Posts : 12 Join date : 2010-04-20
| Subject: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:37 am | |
| Name: Kageryu Shiroeki Age: 23 Gender: Male Species: Human (Kind of) Blood-type: AB- Height: 6'7" Weight: 99 kg = 218.257 lb Likes: Death, desruction, war and slaughter Dislikes: Stupidity, blind following and herd mentality Personality: Kageryu's most distinguishing features are his maniacal laughter and psychotic grins. He is brutal, arrogant, disrespectful, and sadistic. His only reason for existence is to the magical world. He battles like a berserker, ignoring injuries and overpowering his enemies with brute strength and force. He also seems to value his sword to a certain extent. Appearance: Same as my avatar Biography/History: Kageryu had rough childhood as he was just 7 years olds he was forced to fight for his life. When he was around 6 years old his parents died mysteriously. He was traded and sold countless time until he eventually wound up in the hands of the manager of a colosseum. Most children confided in the other children hoping to maintain some form of sanity or at least fool themselves into believing they weren't crazy, whereas Kageryu remained distant from everyone believing that if he stayed distant he would never feel the pain of losing someone, especially if he was the one that killed them. Effectively removing all feelings of empathy, remorse and hesitation to kill. Sometime around when he assumed he was 15 at least he looked like it, was when he started to fight a higher level of enemy Kageryu simply assumed he was fighting in the adult class but it was actually quite a step up, but it was still nothing to him. Kageryu started noticing some opponents had some very fancy sword skills he would drag out his fights with people who used what he learnt was called Shinmeiryuu. Kageryu's father was actually a Shinmeiryuu swordsman as well and so Kageryu would observe them when he fought them and although it was crude he had gained the abilities of a Shinmeiryuu. Kageryu was finally released from the colloseum at the age of 19 and decided that the first thing he would do would be to complete his training and although it took him another 4 years, as soon as he was finished he heartlessly killed his master using the skills he was taught. Kageryu was brought up as close to hell as a person can be and he had become a true demon. Class: Shinmeiryuu Swordsman Preferred Elemental Type: Darkness Magic Keyword: No magic Skills: - Spoiler:
1. Himmlischen Reißzähne (月牙天衝, "Piercer of Heaven"): Kageryu's most basic attack. At the instant of the slash Kageryu's sword absorbs his spiritual energy and releases highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of the blade. Magnifying the slash attack and then flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or in the shape of a wave. Himmlischen Reißzähne is a powerful technique with great force, capable of causing large scale damage. Kageryu can use this attack in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path.
2. Null Sicht ("Zero Visibility") Ability: Essentially a Reißzähne. It takes the shape of a black marble ... yes ... a marble, upon charging. The projectile rapidly compresses into a dense spherical object, and instead of being fired immediately like a blast from a focal point ... is flicked in the general direction of the enemy. Then, like a beam, it shoots forward. A black streak across existence, it will be sent flying forward at a speed of 80 kmh. When it comes into contact with another object (be it the target or a something close by and in the way of the target), it then detonates into a rather small explosion. The blast is seen as a swirling mass of black, due to the properties of the ki infused into it ... that darkness lingers in a two meter radius zone around the stricken area. Here, all light is incapable of penetrating for a few turns, thus creating a zero-visibility zone. (One can easily enter in and exit out of here, however.)
Requires a Single post charge before firing.
Duration: The Darkness lingers for 5 posts, making the area stricken a Zero-Visibility zone until then(Unless you have specialized vision to see in the absence of light). Once the 5 turns are up, it dissipates almost instantaneously.
3. Reißzähne Verteilt (Spread Fang) Kageryu charges for 1 turn and fires an extra large Reißzähne Roughly 5 times the size of an average one which then splits into 25 smaller versions roughly half the size of an average one which rain down and bombard the enemy.
RP Sample: From a Bleach site - Spoiler:
Suiryu was walking along the streets of Karakura town wondering how the Shinigami were doing and if they were all dead yet. He wondered what could be capable of obliterating the Soul Society in just 2 minutes all though the Cero was simple to dodge for even a 3rd seat level Shinigami, so it was safe to estimate that all the stronger Shinigami had survived. But that power it intrigued Suiryu, to be part Shinigami and part Hollow, nothing could possibly be more interesting, at that point everything seemed to freeze and I don't mean pause, I mean freeze solid. "So you're interested in gaining that power?" A voice said, a figure then emerged from the ice on the ground, it was his zanpaktou manifestation Kakushu Setsudanki "Kakushu, if you have something to say then say it." Suiryu demanded "Is there a way I can learn that power?" Suiryu asked "Not from a Shinigami and not from me either." Kakushu said "Well then who? Someone who has already learned that power?" Suiryu guessed "I guess you could say that." Kakushu said then stuck out her tongue and dissapeared back into the ice "HEY WAIT! WHERE ARE YOU GOING!?" Suiryu said and tryed to make a grab for her before she dissapeared but his feet were frozen in place. Then Suiryu could sense something approaching he grabbed out his sword and started hacking at the ice that had frozen his feet in place but the second the blade touched the ice it simply froze over the blade "Dammit." Suiryu muttered as he tried to pull his sword out of the ice "Hello there." another voice said that made Suiryu jump from surprise a figure stood above him that looked like this except a little less naked "Who or what are you?" Suiryu asked "I am the darkness to your light, the fire to your water, the ying to your yang... the hollow to your soul. I am also known as Touketsu Keisei." The mysterious woman said she grabbed the hilt of his zanpaktou and the just melted off of it. "That's the same as my power." Suiryu thought "Decapitate, Kakushu Setsudanki." Keisei said and the Zanpakutou grew to several times its usual size Suiryu acted quickly "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle! Hado number 63 RAIKOH-" but Suiryu was interrupted before he could fire his attack the blue skinned woman had severed his right arm "ARGH!! SON OF A BITCH!!" Suiryu yelled as he moved his hand to stop the bleeding but noticed that it wasn't bleeding at all, the wound had been frozen "She used the water on the sword, and froze it as it passed my wound, and then she changed it back to water insantaneously, I didn't even see her break concentration, even for a second." Suiryu continued to think to himself as a burst of blue reishi came from the womans aura and she was now surrounded by an arch of ice which she then turned to water and smacked into Suiryu, the surface tension not changing it was like being hit in the chest by an enourmous baseball bat. Suiryu went flying into a building and was then covered by layer of frost for good measure "Damn he's dead," Touketsu said "I guess I'll be taking this body now." she said looking around. Meanwhile still frozen to the ground a voice in Suiryu's heaad said "GET UP! YOU'RE NOT GOING TO LET SOMEONE LIKE THAT TAKE OVER ARE YOU!?" A crack appeared in the ice as Suiryu began to regain consciousness "No... You're right," Suiryu said breaking the ice "I can't let this bitch take over." Suiryu began to shunpo towards her; she turned around at the last second only to have Suiryu punch her square in the face. She was sent tumbling about five feet, but then before Suiryu could even blink a shard of ice impaled him and then quickly melted into water and smacked in the chin "There's that baseball bat feeling again." Suiryu said getting back up with a smile on his face "Urgh, How can you be smiling, you should be dead." Touketsu said "And yet here I stand." Suiryu said with a smug look in his face "But how?!" Touketsu said and backfisted Suiryu with a giant hand made of water "I guess I just realised that I'm not allowed to die here." Suiryu said with a continued smile on his face "Well it doesn't matter, you're chapter in this story is OVER!" Touketsu yelled and swung the over sized sword at Suiryus neck. Suiryu then sonidoed forward and caught her arm in mid swing and moved it up her arm to the handle of the enourmous blade and once he did this water surged to the wound where his arm had been cut off earlier and formed a new arm and hand on which the ring and middle finger pointed forward and the index and pinkie pulled backwards "Sorry love, but my chapter is just starting. Darkened by the blood of the beast, forty five angels scream out in terror, forty five demons cry out in victory. Satan claims victory over the holy army and darkness spreads across the land piercing the flesh of the living, a prize for his followers and a torment for his enemies. HADO NUMBER NINETY BLACK COFFIN!" A black lightning encircled the two of them and just before it solidified in to a giant dark prism Suiryu shunpoed away stealing his zanpaktou away from the woman. Suiryu was about to walk away when a Cero shot through him luckily Suiryu had gotten his sword back so the Cero just passed straight through him Suiryu was now made of water again "You just don't know when to quit, now do you?" Suiryu said as he put his hand on his face "pant... pant... I'm.. not going... to lose to someone... like you." Touketsu said and created a sword made out of pure ice "LET'S FINISH THIS!" She yelled and charged at Suiryu. "Very well then... BANKAI, SANMIZURYUU KAKUSHU SETSUDANKI!" Suiryu shouted and a giant dragon it's entire body made completly out of ice up to the 3 heads, One head was made purely of water in it's liquid state, the middle one made of water in it's solid state, ice and lastly the head on the left made of water in it's gaseous state, mist. Suiryu was standing on the middle head made of ice it shot an aurora that froze everything it touched but Touketsu jumped to avoid it and landed on top of it's head and prepared to slash Suiryu but her feet froze to the top of the dragons head, she fell forward arms and torso now bound to dragon as well. The ice started to rise up around her forming some kind of stock which encircled her neck and a clean blade of ice rose directly above her neck it started to drop "WAIT!!" Touketsu screamed, Suiryu held the blade in mid air and waited to see what the hollow had to say. "I'll share my power with you, but it's completly up to you whether you can control it or not." she said with a look on her face that was a mixture of contempt and disgust as she started disentegrating into what seemed to be crystal blue petals. "Just remember," she said while disintegrating "I will grow stronger and when the time comes I will crush you until there is nothing left but a smear on the ground." Koutetsu said as her mouth was the only thing that remained of her and the petal swirled around Suiryu and when they cleared everything was back to normal excpet Suiryu felt something strange attached to his face "This is a hollow mask... or at least a corner of one," But suddenly Suiryu started vomiting what appeared to be... marshmallow? It quickly attached itself to his face and formed what can only be described as a representaion of everything that was evil in Suiryus soul he then ran off into the city trying to find others like him.
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| | | Kageryu Shiroeki
Posts : 12 Join date : 2010-04-20
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:24 am | |
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| | | TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:20 pm | |
| Where it says 'spells', replace it with 'skills' and write out the skills your character has. Other than that, the rest is good, need to see your skills though. |
| | | Umibouzu
Posts : 2815 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:50 pm | |
| Yah, and Shinmeiryuu actually do have skills, as it's an all-purpose style.. Why would you put that as a default Will? You didnt mention anything about them, other then their good demon slayers... |
| | | Kageryu Shiroeki
Posts : 12 Join date : 2010-04-20
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:16 pm | |
| Skills added. Shinmeiryuu skills plus some personal ones. |
| | | TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:15 pm | |
| You're only allowed to start with three skills of your entire choice, can't be extremely high-level skills though. - Quote :
- You didnt mention anything about them, other then their good demon slayers...
Neither did you on your character profile. But, yeah, you're supposed to swap magic for skills if you're a ki-user. |
| | | Kageryu Shiroeki
Posts : 12 Join date : 2010-04-20
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:22 pm | |
| Fine I crossed the ones I don't want to keep. How do I get more skills, if I may ask? |
| | | TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:29 pm | |
| You're able to get more skills through simply going on a training mission. However, you have to follow the 'Breakthrough System' which will be on the rules, though you can get a version of the skills much weaker, 'cause you want to follow the BS later.
But yeah, Ran seems too strong, matters how big, strong the Getsuga's are. Yahazu Giri is quite broken for PvP, I'd prefer you to not to make you instantly RP that you go near any enemy in an RP situation. If you fix Ran, lessening it in other words, I'll approve it, unless Umi has anything to say. |
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| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:36 pm | |
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| | | TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:38 pm | |
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| | | | TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:57 am | |
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| | | Umibouzu
Posts : 2815 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:05 am | |
| Nope, not at all... He's just a Swordsman.. |
| | | Kageryu Shiroeki
Posts : 12 Join date : 2010-04-20
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Tue May 04, 2010 1:14 am | |
| Removed my old techniques and replaced them with new ones. |
| | | Rose
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| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Thu May 06, 2010 12:38 pm | |
| Even though I'm an item mod, I'm pretty sure it's fine... Will or Umi will have to approve it again, they should be here soon though. |
| | | TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Kageryu Shiroeki, Demon Swordsman Mon May 10, 2010 8:09 am | |
| (Sorry I'm slow).
Once again, approved! |
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