Account Name: Jukensong
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Name: Sifler, Darren
Nickname: Trickblue
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 5,11
Weight: 65 kilograms
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation:Neutral
Blood-type: O
Likes: Justice, The next biggest thing, animals, and pudding
Dislikes: Bad language, fast food, and kicks to the face or gut
Fears: Having his sister die, not being able to get his act together
Physical Description: Long hair he dyed blue but with roots of white, Blue eyes, Stout frame and tan skin. (He worked in the desert after that pic.)
Magic Keywords: Innocent Rage take shape, ...
Ki or Magic? Magic
Clothing: Blue Jerkin and leather armor covering the shoulders, shins, elbow and the waist
Accessories: Headband over head and Bandana over face
Extra: Wears mostly Blue and Brown with White trims
Picture:

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Personality
Being mostly a rogue and a vagabond Trickblue stays to himself most of the time. Growing up to deceit he is barely surprised anymore when things turn to the worst. This shaping him into somewhat of a survivalist phenom doing just about everything possible to survival the most impossible of odds. Usually associates himself with sides that represent justice, he'll only do jobs against the rich and corrupt, the enemy of all the lower sectors.

But personality wise he's quite proud, even though he never yells or shouts cutting logic in his tone seems to instigate that he does things that only further his own self or sister. Leaving while arguing is usually the route he takes when he's at a disagreement. He believes it's not abandoning his peers if he opens up the path for them by himself.

History
Being affiliated with almost every known rogue/bandit outlet in the magic world he can be seen in and out in a few of the skirmishes they have been in the last 20 years, Code Named :"TrickBlue" when he goes out to rip a hole in the middle. He, however only does this out of the love for his sister Amelia. Being orphaned, with the disappearance of his father and death of his mother at a very young age, he did whatever he can so she can live a normal life and never have to suffer the emotional trauma he went through for the first 15 years of his life.

...He is still looking for his bastard father who is said to be affiliated with the azure dragons, be it a dragon hunter or possibly a dragon himself Darren will find.

Fighter Type:
Hyrbid:
Employing twin daggers and his support spells, he's happy to call himself a skirmisher, of sorts, being able to rip a hole down the middle when given the opportunity to do so. He was seen as the vanguard for most of his missions.

Weaponry/Equipment
Has a variety of blades and wears embosses leather armor over his chainmail that also lies atop of his jerkin. Wears metal armguards and shinguards.


2 Pistols /w extended clips, red dot sights, and detachable suppressors :D

Name: Beretta 96 Pistols
Description: A full sized handgun. Effective range anything within 50m. Uses regular rounds

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1 Semi-Automatic Rifle /w ACOG scope, and detachable suppressors

Name: Beretta Cx4 Storm
Description- A blow back action rifle. Effective from 15m- 880m. Uses regular rounds

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Stats 74
Strength:14
Accuracy: 14
Endurance: 20
Speed: 25
Intelligence: 1
Has no actual training in magic. Uses only the two incantations his father left him. It's of a rare variation, from his lineage that he has to find and decipher himself, Mostly support magic.

Stat Points Earned: 0/29
Jewels Earned: 3,210,000

Source

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Skills & Disciplines:
Way of the Intercepting Blade:
Trained in the vagabond style it is basically a Jeet Kune Do with any pair of blades. Also having practice and preformed high speed maneuvers for long periods he has a knack for finding ways to mess up opponents rhythms and timing.

I'm a Rogue Brah
Encompasses all rogue stereotypes be it lockpicking, trap mastery, or damned good looks.


Gun Enthusiast
The character just likes playing with guns so he/she doesn't really know anything about them besides aiming and shooting well enough to be used in combat. Since the bullets he/she uses isn't in anyway magic related it's damage can be negligible depending on the person's passive defense, unless he gets a nice shot in. Reload is average at best and bordering on slow when it comes to dual wielding or when being pressured

Name: Darren Silfer
Number: LI (51)
Title: Cruentus Interdico (Bloody Outlaw)
Virtus: Audacia (Courage)
Directio: Auster (South)
Tonus: Cyaneum (Indigo)
Astralitas: Uranus (Uranus)
Artifact: Amoveo Aer (Shifting Ethereal)
Artifact Information: Darren's artifact takes the form of a angelic patterned gold knife that allows him to shift his weight within no time at all. He can change his weight from 0.01 kilograms to 100,000 kilograms. The weight change is almost instant.

Magic Name: Darren "Trick Blue" Sifler
Magic Type: Affliction/Support/Skirmisher Hybrid
Magic Description:
TP/KP Earned:Wind pressure, removal of heat from the area 0|7
Techniques: (37/37)


Vortex - Rank 5
Type: Support/Affliction
Incantation: Innocent Rage take shape! Envelop the area!
Range: 5-10 meters around him
Effect: Wind pressure going in every direction disrupting everything around him. Uses it to slow and push opponents in the vortex to the ground while people outside away. Also used to help Darren dart in and out in his attacks when they are in the vortex, making it seem he's riding the wind during the duration. Powerful Mages are still able to move around but not as freely as they want.

Endless Winter- rank 5
Type: Support/Affliction
Incantation: Innocent Rage take shape! Brandish your cold breath!
Range: 5-10 meters around him
Effect: Sucks the heat out from the area. Used in conjuction with Vortex to have a mini blizzard in the circle. It however can chill Darren himself if it weren't for his attire and extra heat that is given to him while siphoning the area.

Shundo Rank 5
Type-Mobility
Incantation- N/A
Range- 15 meters max
Description- By sending magical energy beneath himself, Darren is capable of launching himself at intense speeds between two unobstructed points, almost instantaneously. As he moves, he leaves after images from the point he was previously standing in. It is possible to predict where he will travel and so intercept him before hand. Usually refers to the move as Jecht Stream, since his master, Jecht, taught him the move and came up with the name.


Stealth - Rank 5
Type: Support
Incantation: Untold Malice take form! Veiled Murder...
Range: Himself and anyone within arm's reach
Effect: Using the darker dragoon magics Darren covers himself with shadows. At this rank he's hidden from sight and lower ranked sensor magics. It's effectiveness is 30 - rank* 2. So at this rank it's 20 meters until you would be able to a visage of him.


Wind Magic Preparation - Rank 5
Type: Passive/Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Anything near his blades or something his blades just touched recently
Effect:With his blades enhanced by wind magic Darren has an edge in melee combat. The wind magic can be made to increase the reach of his attack by 2 feet, makes the attack sharper depending on the length the wind magic Darren is willing it to be. Also if Darren gets a successful attack depending on the severity/deep the attack with just a thought or notion from Darren he can cause the wind magic stuck inside the enemy to be released. At this rank the cuts from the wind magic just results in many cuts in the afflicted areas or a long gash.


Shadow shaping Rank 5
Type: Utility
Incantation:N/A, requires the user to channel magic though.
Range: Close (must be touching/ standing near) a shadow or area of low light.
Effect:The user sends magical power into a shadow and shapes it into some form of inanimate object. The size and density of the object is dependent on the amount of magic used in its creation and the amount of shadow available at the time. Supposedly, any weapon created with this is magically enhanced and can deal damage comparable to a close ranged sagitta magica spell. The objects created will last until Darren dispels them or Darren's concentration is broken, this can be dealing damage to Darren or the objects equal to 4* their in a single turn. However damage to it is not cumulative and so it must either be destroyed all at once or it will not be broken at all. At this rank he can't use it in conjunction with most of his moves and he might have a bit of lag to shape the shadows into something he's not familiar with.


Greater Pudding Dragon - Rank 5
Type- Summon
Incantation- Innocent Rage take Shape! Pudding Dragon!
Range- 25m
Description- A dragon summon made out of dirt. Used almost exclusively for defense helping get in the way of blows in dragon form or appearing as a huge dirt mound on at the site of impact. Can use it's claws and teeth to attack others but again is mostly focused on defending it's master. Summoning him will have the summon by his side unless dismissed or out of magical energies. However if it's damaged enough Darren has to dismiss it so that it can replenish it's magical energies to help defend him more efficiently. He has a six pac and is about as tall as half an adult.


His summon's stats now

Strength- 3
Accuracy- 3
Endurance- 14
Speed- 12
Intelligence- 3

Techniques of the pudding dragon.

Buffer - Rank 4
Type- Defensive
Incantation-- N/A
Range- 25m
Description- Acting as a buffer Albert gets between an attack and Darren he is forms into a mound of dirt between Darren and the attack. Higher ranks increases the range Albert protects and how much damage is mitigated.

You forgot techniques... Ask Al. He should be able to guide you through that part of it. I unfortunately am not that good at explaining it.

who is that?

Alberio... The other Mod who was on earlier. Look him up :P

Right'o

Kk thanks

Okay so first of delete all the extraneous stuff like the sentence next to the 45 SP. Or that other sentance next to stat points earned. Stuff like tht which just gives an explantion.

Personally I'd like yo see a bit more in personality but that's just me.

Now most things which you use in combat (spells, significant maneuvers) require you to put them into technique format. If you don't then you won't have any spells (beyond the basic ones for all mages) with which to draw on IRP

Now just after your application you should fill in this part here;

Code:

[u]Magic Name:[/u]
[u]Magic Type:[/u]
[u]Magic Description:[/u]
[u]TP/KP Earned:[/u] 0|0
[u]Techniques:[/u]

[b](Name of technique)[/b] - (Rank)
Type:
Incantation:
Range:
Effect:

This way we can get an idea as to the theme of magic you will be using. For techniques just fill out the format for each one you want with an appropriate rank next to it (see here for appropriate ranks; https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/t278-spell-and-technique-system) If a mod feels that the technique is too powerful for the rank then we will work with you on nerfing it until it is suitable

Now as a starting character you have ten free technique points to start out with. That means you can have any number of techniques whose totaled rank is equal to or less than the initial ten points. Any combination works so long as you meet the listed intelligent requirements. For example as a starting character you could have 2 rank 5 techniques or 1 rank five technique and 5 rank one techniques, it really doesn't matter (but you should know that rank 1 techs are INSANELY weak).

Try making a technique and we can go from there.

Cast a look on other apply, it may help you to see this technique point better.

Correct the spoiler on your image :

This way :



[*spoiler][*img]Your link[*/img][/*spoiler]

Just remove the "*" and add your link between and it will work

This any good?

Got 2 left in my head. I wanna put in.

Let's see those two then eh?

Also, to add onto what Alberio said, your spells at first can't be any higher rank than 6.

dorianodet wrote:

Cast a look on other apply, it may help you to see this technique point better.

Correct the spoiler on your image :

This way :



[*spoiler][*img]Your link[*/img][/*spoiler]

Just remove the "*" and add your link between and it will work

Thank you btw

Hmmm make it a rank 5 technique shrink the range to a maximum of 10 meters and be aware that it will cause a contant drain on your mana for each turn it is active and that anyone strong enough/ with enough endurance or with a powerful enough spell/attack (aka, guns and bullets/ saggitta magica spells) should be able to hit you.

As to what Jess says your spells can be at least rank 6 so long as you have at least 10 inteligence. But you are still restricted to the 10 technique points at start. :)

Alberio wrote:

As to what Jess says your spells can be at least rank 6 so long as you have at least 10 inteligence. But you are still restricted to the 10 technique points at start. :)

I think I'm Kyle...?

Eh I should just take out Pudding dragon and make em both 5's eh?

Well, I'd keep at least one spell for defense.

Yes probably and I'm afraid that you won't be able to teleport or use your cloak to block attacks. Just not fair really.

ALso, you should keep in mind that starting chracters are SUPPOSED to be weak. DOn't worry you should e able to get strong really soon if you areactive, post often and have a good mentor (usually one of the mods/advanced members)

Both support me so it's like a passive defense I guess and a pudding shield

Oh yea I'll take that out for now.

Further in I'll add that later if I can.

brb

Fair enough. Now make the changes to your character sheet and you have my 1/2 approval. ^^ Jess could use a new Sparring partner. Hehehe~

K there's I should be all done tinkering.

I guess I'll have to do a few things to get a permanent pudding dragon summonor link a ma jig, but I'll leave it to that for now.

1/2 approval... Yup, two mods need to approve!

I re-read it all, it's all fine 2/2

Err, guys. You need to have at least 1 in in each stat, it's an unspoken rule, lol.

O_O When did he change this? The first time I look at it his template were balanced.

Strength:7
Accuracy: 9
Endurance: 13
Speed: 15
Intelligence: 0

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There needs to be a '1' in intelligence.

Yep I understood, but when I first look at it not long ago there were point in the itelligence stat. I'm sure of it (7)