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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:40 pm | |
| Account name: Samuel
Name: Samuel Nickname: Age: 16 Gender: Male Height: 1,75 m Weight: 64 kg Group: N/A Reputation: 0 Rank: D Affiliation: Dark Blood-type: A Likes: Cats, kids, happy persons, Dislikes: Dogs, insolence, Fears: Strident and spontaneous sounds and noises Physical Description: His face is pretty common, pentagonal shaped with black, messy hair, dark-green eyes and a weak and frail body. He enjoys sunlight but despite that his skin is pale. He rarely shows any emotion, but you'll know if he's confused because he tends to hang his head. Samuel isn't quite a girls choice when it comes to muscles, he's not that skinny but not that muscular either, he's also got long arms and legs and rarely displays his naked body in the public. Magic Keywords: Ki or Magic? Magic Clothing: Usualy, when he travels, a long, black robe with diferent blue, geometrical symbols. Underneath he wears a molded, dark-blue blouse with a black t-shirt underneath, and light-blue jeans. Accessories: -a star shaped amulet made out of wood (necklace) -a lot of paper -chalk, pencils, -the charms pre-made using the paper he has Extra: A tattoo on his right shoulder and a small scar on his heart (and I mean upon the skin)
Personality At first sight Samuel is completly normal, the only thing that stands him out is his robe so when he usualy stays a bit longer in a town he discards the robe and puts it somewhere safe. He's a silent, shy and contemplative guy. The first trait you would observe is his humbleness. Always with his head down and avoiding to be prideful, he seeks to go unnoticed and prefers to endure the insults thrown at him than to fight, but it depends on his mood. In a group, he always observes the social interactions betwen the members and speaks when he finds it necessary. When it comes to girls, Samuel is rather shy and prefers to respect her intimacy than to flirt (he has some kind of high principles) but he compliments when he sees it posible (i.e. the situation or the other guys around her).
History Samuel has lived a pretty life in his small village near Argyre. Despite the fact that his parents were farmers therefore he should have been a lot more sturdier he's rather frail and weak. His life was uneventful until his village was raided and captured by a group of cultists. The raiders planned what would have been seen as an invocation of a powerfull demon and for this the villagers would have been sacrificed as well as a "vessel" for the demon. Unfortunetly (or luckily), Samuel has been chosen to be the vessel but when the cultists tried to invoke the demon something went horribly wrong and Samuel woke up in the midst of a massacre. The slaughtered corpses didn't seemed to horrify Samuel much, for he has seen unimaginable things in the place one may call Hell. From there on Samuel beared a tattoo on his right shoulder and a little scar on his heart, both a mistery for the young boy. From then, he has wandered aimlessly upon this realm, seeking knowledge of the creatures he saw despite his past.
Class Onmyoudo
Weaponry/Equipment -a small, usual knife that he uses for different purposes like cutting meat (but he can use it for offensive though)
Stats – 45 Strength: 8 Accuracy: 9 Endurance: 6 Speed: 9 Intelligence: 13
Stat Points Earned: 0/0 Jewels Earned: 500,000
Skills & Disciplines:
Drawing Magic Circles - Upon hours of study and practice, Samuel has come to handle the drawings of magic circles, seals, etc. that he uses in his techniques
Abnormal Composure - Regarding his past, Samuel has a composure that is hard to break (i.e. seeing mangled corpses, or disgusting scenes)
Magic Name: Demonology Magic Type: Supportive TP/KP Earned: 0|0 Magic Description: Samuel is specialised in invoking different entities in helping him by drawing magic circles on the ground and using a seal of the demon he wishes to invoke. Because an invocation takes a lot of time it is done usually before the battle but he is able to use techniques that are done instantly such as a poisonous version of Sagitta Magica. He is also able to use different ocultic symbols to cause different effects on his opponents, friends or himself. Techniques: 10/10
Invocation (5) Type: Supportive, Offensive or Defensive (depending wether it is a Zenki or a Goki) Invocation: I summon you demon of the abyss, rise from your prison and serve me. Range: Close-range Effect: Summons a demon for you to do your bidding. (requires the drawing of a magic circle)
Poisonous Arrow (5) Type: Offensive Invocation: Corrupt the blood and devour the flesh Range: Mid-range Effect: A magic arrow is formed from poisonous substances. The arrow can pierce through skin but it's attack is small, but once the arrow has pierced it will dissolve and poison the targeted opponent. Depending on the rank of the spell, the poisoned opponent could die in several minutes, hours or even days.
Demons
Bathin Type: Goki Appereance: A small (less than 1 m) demon. He has 4 bony arms and 2 (also bony) legs. Two little horns on a small, oval face, large, cat-like eyes and a sharp, long, reptilian-like tail. Stats - Strenght - 5 Accuracy - 5 Endurance - 3 Speed - 10 Intelligence - 12 Abilities Bathin is frail, therefore weak when it comes to physical attacks but because of his speed he can gain momentum and slice his opponent with his tail (the strenght of the attack would be Strenght/2 + Speed/2). A decent attack is all he needs to be immobilized. He is able to create a spiritual shield that can block around 2 rank IV attacks, 3 rank III attacks and about 6 smaller attacks (with a rank 6 attack the shield will be shattered). Bathin isn't so hard to control but once every six hours (depending on your intelligence) you must perform a rite of bonding so the bonds that makes him do your will will be re-enforced, preventing him from breaking loose.
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:46 pm | |
| You need to use all 10 Technique points, and tell us what Demons you can summon, as well as their stats & abilities. |
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Kagami737
Posts : 365 Join date : 2010-11-16 Age : 30 Location : Behind you!
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:48 pm | |
| What BRS means is it's recommended you use all the technique points... But I do see that problem with the demons needing to be listed... |
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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:49 pm | |
| Wow... you're quick at responding... I'll list the demons when I can |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:50 pm | |
| No "recommendation" about it, I distinctively remember William saying on one of these applications that we need to use all 10. |
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Kagami737
Posts : 365 Join date : 2010-11-16 Age : 30 Location : Behind you!
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:52 pm | |
| I don't remember that... Huh. |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:53 pm | |
| It was back when I first joined, I was reading through the Approved & Unapproved character profiles. |
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Alberio
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2010-08-07 Age : 32 Location : Ohio
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:21 pm | |
| No, you don't need to use all ten points... but you do need to give us the stats of the demons to see if they are fair/equitable. |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:26 pm | |
| Hmm.. I am going to find that post after I get back.. Either way, I want some demons ~ |
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Umibouzu
Posts : 2815 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:20 pm | |
| If you plan on demon summoning; you have to give it stats...
also, if your so heavily invested in magical circles, they are ABSOLUTELY required, you wont understand now, but make sure you always draw them...
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Jukensong Baka Blue
Posts : 656 Join date : 2011-01-27
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Sun Jan 30, 2011 11:32 pm | |
| Try dumping 2 or 3 points in being able to make them circles fast or something.
I really wouldn't let you do that if I ever saw you without one.
And the last few points in how your bond with your demon gives makes them stay there permanently and never go against ya.
All the little things.
I had to cut down 4 of my techs down to 2
(Even though the last 2 were pretty silly) |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 1:44 am | |
| I didn't say you have to use all 10 MP, at least I don't remember saying that. Though you do have to use all the SP, considering we don't keep track of the starter SP, only the SP you earn. If you didn't use all of them up, problems may occur. |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 1:48 am | |
| Either way.. I gave up on looking for it. |
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Umibouzu
Posts : 2815 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 2:28 am | |
| Just remember the magical circles... |
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Daisuke
Posts : 1468 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Position Lock On
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:49 am | |
| Nope no requirement of using all the MP/KP since even Hoshiko started out with just 1/10 |
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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:06 am | |
| UPDATED Note: I reckon Samuel will be able to invoke diferent demons when he learns how, right? From manuscripts or other demonologists. Also, allow me to ask you something: are the misions created by you and a moderator will rank it or will the mision be given by the moderator? |
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Jukensong Baka Blue
Posts : 656 Join date : 2011-01-27
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:12 am | |
| you can make it urself.
Read mine or Ryuga's stories.
Our first missions so far.
Tracking origins and the search for knowledge. |
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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:21 am | |
| Thank you for the explanation, now someone must approve of my character and it's done... right? |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:35 am | |
| Listing your Appearance traits is nice and simple, but a basic paragraph format would be better suited, it is also more understood and commonplace.
Can you expand more on what your Knife does, is it just a regular Knife? Also, your demon is pretty weak for a Rank 5 summon, you can boost its power some more, so all the stats add up to 35 (which is the NPC template amount) the demon can also have an attack equal to or less than a Rank 5 skill(s) |
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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:05 am | |
| ... done. Sorry for so many questions but can I increse the the number of techniques I can use without sacrificing the rank of one of them? Also, when I completed a mission, will the moderator change my stats or I shall change it and the moderator will check? |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 10:13 am | |
| You have 10 points to use on Techniques, how you use them is up to you, as long as the power level matches its respective rank, it doesn't matter. After you complete a mission, you will make a History topic about upgrading your character, you will tell them the thread (with a link and the rewards) and you will tell them how many points you want to use and on what.. you also use it to buy things and update your overall money counter. Your demon has 40 points total, it should be at 35; your appearance is also listed out as well. Here is the skills power chart: - Rank 4 - These spells or techniques may begin to inflict a personal status on the enemy or result in things like sealing another weaker magic. Spells ranked at this are usually considered pretty useful.
- Rank 5 - Techniques begin to create a difference between you and others. Your techniques will be more effective on certain types of enemies or monsters. Spells get more useful and may have many different effects like dispersing other magic, etc... Be creative.
- Rank 6 - These spells become stronger and more abnormal than even what normal humans can create. They're more unique and are much stronger than any other 'newbie' spell. These are usually fully incarnated to deliver a strong and powerful offense.
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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 10:49 am | |
| So to make this clear, the rank of a spell determines what the spell can do and does not indicate the level of it's power(damage)? Sorry to be a bother but I want to make this right. I fixed the demon and I don't know what else I should put in the description |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:01 am | |
| The Rank of the spell is its power, but at these lower Ranks, it means very little difference.. but also somewhat a lot. 4 & 5 is what a beginner Mage would be able to do, 6 is something a more moderate powered Mage can preform and is a little bit more demanding in the terms of power. |
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Samuel
Posts : 40 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:17 am | |
| So what else should I change? Or that should be it and I should wait for a moderator to approve my character? |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Samuel - The wandering child Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:21 am | |
| Everything looks fine enough to me, you should get approved, at least. Just good enough for me.
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