Account Name: foise
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Name: Foise Leond Thurrell
Nickname:
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 69 kg
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Neutral
Blood-type: A
Likes:
Music
-He likes most music but Electronica is his favorite. Helps him stay focused on one task
Junk food
-He eats more junk food than he probably should but still manages to stay skinny... maybe an ability of his but nobody really knows ;P
Reading
-He is almost always eeking new knowledge and loves to read on his spare time.

Dislikes:
Hypocrites
-He hates obvious hypocrites and people that say they are good when they aren't
ignorant people
-People that are to ignorant to see what is right infront of them or the truth behind something.
Fears:
Being forgotten
-One of his biggest fears is to die without leaving behind a legacy. To him it doesn't matter what he is remembered for as long as he is remembered.
Losing someone he loves
-He is afraid of the ones he loves getting hurt or losing them.
Physical Description: Foise has long black hair tied back into a ponytail. he has darker skin than most people because of his German heritage.
Magic Keywords: Gib mir Kraft (german for "give me strength")
Ki or Magic? Magic
Clothing: He usually wears a black robe with gold trim, red sash, and a dark green cloak
Accessories: : He always wears a bronze chain around his neck. There is nothing on the chain but some of the links on it have clearly been broken and put back together
Extra: : He has a large scar that goes all the way from his index finger to his shoulder on his left arm and smaller scars around it. He also has a burn over his left eye from a piece of burning bone hitting him in the face as a kid.
Picture:

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Personality
Foise has a hard time trusting anyone because of being betrayed so badly in the past. If someone can make him trust or care for them then he would never do anything to hurt them and would even give his life to save them but if doesn’t trust people very easily. Those people that get past his emotionless exterior will find that he is a very caring individual. To hide from reality Foise loses himself in computer games and books. When he is reading a book or playing a game those worlds are as real to him as his own life.

History
Foise was born in southern Germany. He had a relatively normal childhood until his 10th birthday. On his 10th birthday his parents were killed by a group of mages that said that it was for the greater good. He never understood why they were killed but he has despised most of humanity ever since. Especially those who say they are doing the right thing. After his parents death he visited their graves every day. 2 years after his parent’s deaths he was approached by a man in a dark cloak. The man offered to teach Foise how to bring his parents back from the dead in exchange for his help at his shop. Foise helped out around the man’s shop for 4 years until he decided to confront the man about his promise. The man agreed that Foise had worked at his shop long enough and agreed to teach him how to bring his parents back. The man went to the graveyard and brought back his parents coffins as well as several others. The man opens your parent’s coffins and tells you to cut your arm say “Ich binde dieses Gremium auf einen Vertrag zu meinem Willen” and let a drop of blood fall onto the corpse of his mother. Foise did as the man said and his mother’s body began to move. An evil smile grew on the old man’s face as he murmured something about the rumors being true. Foise noticed his laugh and that yes this was his mother’s body but this was not his mother. He realized that he had been tricked and in his rage he took the dagger and dragged it up his left arm saying the incantation. He then threw the blood on the dagger onto the other corpses. All the in the room corpses rose from their coffins and Foise commanded them to attack the man. Sheer terror filled the man’s eyes as he witnessed the power of this kid’s bloodline. He quickly cast a spell and vanished from the room. Foise broke down crying. Waves of emotion filling his body but in this state he lost control of the dead that he had raised. When he realized what was happening it was too late for him to do anything. His dagger was out of reach and he wasn’t strong enough to do anything about the oncoming horde of necromancers. All of a sudden the corpses caught aflame. They only burned for a couple of seconds until they were turned to ash and bone. Looking past the corpses of those that he raised he say someone dressed in the same outfit that the people who killed his parents had worn. The man explained that Foise’s bloodline allows him to raise the dead and that it was tradition to teach them how on their 10th birthday. He explained that they had killed his parents so that they wouldn’t have to kill him. Because if he were to learn the full power of his bloodline than it was a threat to everyone. That is what happens when both parents have the power to raise the dead and not just one. If trained properly the child would control too much power. Foise trembled in the corner after hearing this. Fearing that the man was going to kill him to finish what they had started he ran. He ran and still runs from those who killed his parent those who hunt the Necrotic bloodline.

Class
Necromancer
-He raises dead bodies and spirits to do the fighting for him
Weaponry/Equipment
Dagger, Spell Book
Stats – 45
Strength:7
Accuracy:9
Endurance:9
Speed:8
Intelligence:12

Stat Points Earned: 0|0
Jewels Earned: 500,000

Sources:

Skills & Disciplines:
Computers
-He has always been good with computers even at a young age and has taught himself more in 10 years than most people learn in their entire lives about them

His preferred element would have to be earth as he is a Taurus

TP/KP Earned: 0|0
Techniques: 10/10

Death's Shadow - (4)
Type: Defensive
Incantation:Schatten schützt mich(German for "Shadow protect me")
Range: Self
Effects: Helps the caster hide in shadows allowing him to observe what is going on but not to act on it. It takes 10 seconds to use this ability. This ability is canceled out if the caster uses another ability. The user is able to move while in the shadow without being noticed


Necrotic Manifestation - (6)
Type: depends on use when summoned (generally offensive)
Incantation: Ich binde dieses Gremium auf einen Vertrag zu meinem Willen ( german for "I bind this body on a contract to my will")
Range: The casters blood must touch the corpse.
Effect: Raises a corpse to follow the will of the caster until the corpse is destroyed or the caster is killed. This spell takes roughly 1 minute to cast. At this level the mage can summon up to 2 corpses without any side effects. If however the caster decides to summon more then he must concentrate on keeping control of them. If the caster loses control of the corpses then they attack the caster and ignore everything else. The caster also loses control of all of the corpses not just the ones they tried to summon over their comfortable limit. (see corpse entry below)
(This Spell requires blood as a reagent. The blood seals the contract between the caster and the corpse.)
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Corpse
A corpse raised by the Necromancer
Age: depends on corpse
Gender: Depends on corpse
Height: depends on corpse
Weight: depends on corpse
Stats - 45
Strength: 12
Accuracy: 10
Endurance: 10
Speed: 10
Intelligence: 3

Claw - (2)
Type: Physical Offensive
Incantation: None (the Corpse in unable to talk)
Range: within arm reach
Effect: Claws the target with its nails

Grab - (2)
Type: Physical Offensive/supportive
Incantation: None (the Corpse in unable to talk)
Range: within arm reach
Effect: grabs the target pulling them closer and immobilizing them until they break free (doesn't harm the target)

Bite - (2)
Type: Physical Offensive
Incantation: None (the Corpse in unable to talk)
Range: close range (best after grab)
Effect: The corpse bites the target dealing physical damage to them. If used after grab the target become completely immobilized for 5-10 seconds or until the corpse is pulled off or destroyed.

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You should give them names, its just easier. The spells arent to bad

Ok... I'd thought there was something wrong with the speel rank relative to intelligence but I checked and no. 1/2 Approval.

Umibouzu wrote:

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You should give them names, its just easier. The spells arent to bad

Do you mean give the Corpses names?

Jess, don't give your approval randomly when it's clear that some things are lacking :

First : your ability to hide in shadow. I could accept it if you can't use it without some time of incantation, a rank 4 spell making you invinsible at will is kinda overpowered. If it's something used for hiding or for non-direct dighting purpose, then just adding some time for the spell to be cast will make it balanced. But remember that character of higher level will probably be able to sense through your spell :)

For your summoning ability, it's the exact opposite, it's too weak right now for a rank 6 spell

Rank 6 - 45 SP & 6 TP

You can give them up de 45 SP, and you must put rank on their tech, based on the 6TP you can use right now.

Just change it and it will be perfect

I meant the Raise Dead Ability, give it a cool name, like Bone Dead Reborn, or Knockesoldaten

Updated
-changed stats of Corpse
-added cast time to "Death's Shadow"
-renamed raise dead to necrotic manifestation

I like it, But have Dorianodet approve it, im just a Magic Mod.

Like dori said, you can raise the power of your corpses, you don't have to name them either.. you also have Technique points, which means they can have natural skills equal to or less than a Rank 6, total.. but that is only for the corpses.

Perfect 2/2 approval. For the 10sec incantation, your invisibility spell will still be quite efficient, even for a rank 4 spell.


This thread is now closed and moved to the good section, congratulation :)

Lol, targeting an inactive person for your totally unapproved rule~

I would like to point out that this is a CUSTOM class
he is exempt from the rules

But he still doesnt have starting spells...

it's INACTIVE. Stop posting here.