Account Name: Tristen
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Name: Tristen Lollel
Nickname: Master Demon
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: 6”8
Weight: 83kg
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Dark
Blood-type: A
Likes: Demon race, colour green
Dislikes: Holy People, angels
Fears: Getting blessed or something similar that may remove or curse his powers and weaken them
Physical Description: Tristen has a tough build and has flowing green hair and green eyes, he’s tall and strong and muscle-built.
Magic Keywords: Death to all
Ki or Magic? Ki
Clothing: Tristen has many different attires, varying from each. However, he mostly always wears a jacket or sorts, mostly one colour and a green scarf he stole and killed a human for it. It may still have the blood stains.
Accessories: N/A
Extra: N/A
Picture:

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Personality:
Tristen loves to manipulate people’s minds, give them the wrong impression and completely ruin them emotionally. This is simply because he thinks he could be like this because of his demon heritage. On the outside he acts kind and caring, however he's really a backstabbing murderer who feels no remorse for doing so. He loves the thrill of killing, fighting and destroying everything. He has dreams of becoming the most powerful being alive; so he's very confident in himself.

History
Tristen was born with white hair, however because of his love for the colour green, he dyed it green. Not much is known about him, although he was born by a demon and has huge demonic power…

Throughout Tristen's life, he's killed over fifty people with simple manipulation and trickery; he has stabbed people to death, caused them to explode. He's never been caught and his identity still remains a mystery as his demonic ki confuses normal magic.

Tristen earned a title of "Demon Lord" from his colleagues, also demons, simply because, even though he's not the strongest, if you ever meet him, no matter what the time, no matter how long you knew him, the mortality rate was extremely high. Women, children, men, animals, no matter what, Tristen will take pursuit to kill them; if they're his target.

Class: Demon Fighter

Weaponry/Equipment: He’s proficient with almost all weapons, but doesn’t use them much

Stats – 62
Strength: 11
Accuracy: 11
Endurance: 19
Speed: 18
Intelligence: 3

Stat Points Earned: 0|19
Jewels Earned: 2,060,000

Sources:

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Skills & Disciplines:
Weapon Expert: Tristen can fight and create any and all weapons with his ki.
Ki Destroyer: Tristen has earned the ability to reserve his ki properly which results in him lasting longer in fights then people who spam and drain their ki away.

Name: Tristen Lollel
Number: XCIX (99)
Title: Vulnus Cultor (Wound Worshipper)
Virtus: Audacia (Courage)
Directio: Septentrio (North)
Tonus: Nigror (Black)
Astralitas: Pluton (Pluto)
Artifact: Bracchium Intra (Arm of the Inside)
Artifact Information: Tristen's artifact takes the form of armour that goes around his arm to his shoulder. Across the arm guard, there's a long red gauge that slowly fills up. The gauge determines how much damage Tristen has taken and increases the more damage he's taken. When the gauge is filled, he can unleash a barrage of spikes that initiate the same damage that Tristen has taken.

Magic Name: N/A
Magic Type: N/A
Magic Description: N/A
TP/KP Earned: 13|13
Techniques: (16/16)

Demon Shot - (5)
Type: Ranged Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: 50 meters
Effect: Tristen surges his ki into his hands and shoots a bullet of devil ki. The devil ki now at rank 5, eats away at flesh and causes serious burns if makes contact with human skin.

Demon Craft - (4)
Type: Supportive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Next to him
Effect: Tristen surges his ki around his body and it creates a clone created out of his ki that follows Tristen to create just as much damage. At his level, he can only create one clone… though he may create two, however that will drain his stamina. Clones last three turns if not destroyed. The clones are one-half weaker than Tristen and are unable to use techniques. They fight normally like a normal human, punching and kicking.

Demon Slash - (5)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: 2 meters
Effect: Tristen surges his hands with demon ki and slashes forward causing a slash stronger than a sword of steel. The demonic ki is hard and can easily cut off limbs if hit successfully.

Demon Roar - (2)
Type: Stunning
Incantation: N/A
Range: 10 meters
Effect: Tristen channels his demonic ki to his mouth, as he then follows up with a massive roar that causes ear piercing effects. If within 10 meters of Tristen, it may cause ruptured ear drums or bleeding.

The first class is supposed to read D, yes I knw it's confusing and personally I think it should be put as rank not class but still, the first one is supposed to be D for all starting characters.

Secondly I am going to have to ask you to explain ALOT more about your personality and your history. So far you've just told us that he likes to ruin people emotionally, Sorry but I am afraid that is not enough. Furthermore, the whole "appeared out of nowhere thing", with limited back story is really cliche.... even more so than the "young boy who's parents were taken away from him" thing. So please at least give him some background and personality.

Done...

How much weaker are the clones, can they use techniques?

Hopefully done...

1/2 approval!~

Since you nerfed the spell, I think it's fine!!

2/2 approval, so this thread has been closed!