Account Name:Umibouzu
(Fine... im back)
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Name:Umibouzu Ryuusui
Nickname: Umi
Age:16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11''
Weight:134lbs
Group: Ryu-ju-go
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Dark (As in anti-MM and thus Anti-school)
Blood-type: N/A, since my body is made out of water now
Likes: Snowcones, Yoko <3
Dislikes: MM, School, Humans
Fears: Yoko's demon side, Not protecting people
Physical Description:Hes not to tall, not to big and not very muscular, he tends to where clothes that make him stick out in public even though he does not want the attention. He actually appears rather sickly and his blue hair is often messed up, as much as he tries to keep it nice
Magic Keywords: Gerogero
Ki or Magic? Magic
Clothing: He wears his magic robes, when in his Ryujin uniform, its dark black.
Accessories: N/A
Extra: He no longer had a body, so no scars. But his blue hair is now gray, his skin is pale, the only thing he kept was his blue eyes, which are the only color to him.
Picture:

Spoiler:

PersonalityUmi is usually a laid-back easy going guy, except he takes his jobs very seriously and is especially caring to people in need, he remains (some-what) calm, nurturing and analytical in serious situations. He has a insatiable love of books, magic and the study of magical societies and virtually anything about the world. After his transformation he remains stoic, lonesome and closed off to those he's not close too those he isnt close too. Humans annoy him.


History

(After the Jusanbutsu)
Ill split it up into a bullets:
-Umi went to the Ultimate Spirit of Water to regain his body
-He gave up his magic, and surrendered his "body" to the control of the Water Spirit
-He returned to school, but found the lying government run school ran parallel to his ideals, as they were both racist against the magic races and did shady dealings with criminal organizations
-He broke into the administrators office and took the teleportation magic, sending him to the Human world, where he seeks to create an organization to bring down the MM government and his former school.


Class Cleric-a defensive mage who supports his commands with his magic power, lacks offensive abilities or physical abilities.

Weaponry/Equipment Wand, Gun, Staff, Folium Artimisae

Archive Magic Wristband
An expensive item that can activate to see data stored inside of it. It's not accurately updated by the Mahora Network, but does have a lot of information on all subjects around the world on it.

Illusion Rod
A rod that can cast illusions at a higher level than you normally could.

Stats – 129
Strength: 10
Accuracy: 22
Endurance: 20
Speed: 20
Intelligence: 57

Stat Points Earned: 0|78
Jewels Earned: 2,430,000

Sources:

Subdue Water Spirits - 1 SP, 1 MP and 100,000 Drachma.
Tutoring Students - 1 SP, 1 MP and 50,000 Drachma.
Treasure Hunting - 2 SP, 1 MP and 200,000 Drachma.
Magic Knight Seminar - 2 SP, 1 MP and 200,000 Drachma.
Subdue A Dragon - 2 SP, 1 MP and 200,000 Drachma.
Umi & Yoko's date - 3 SP, 3 MP and 500,000 Drachma.
Capture The Illusionist - 2 SP, 1 MP and 350,000 Drachma.
Secret Evil Mission - 2 SP, 2 MP and 100,000 Drachma.
Crevice Monster Hunt - 2 SP, 1 MP and 300,000 Drachma.
Library Mission #2 - 1 MP, 1 SP, 10,000 Drachma.
Magic Offense Training Session - 2 SP, 2 MP.
Magic Stamina Training Mission - 2 SP and 2 MP
Helping A Ninja - 2 SP, 1 MP, 100,000 Drachma.
Library Mission #1 - 3 SP, 2 MP
Extinction of Ignorance - 3 SP, 2 MP, 300,000 Drachma.
Gathering Members - 3 SP, 3 MP, 150,000 Drachma.
Peace, Calm, Tranquility, Violence - 2 SP, 2 MP and 200,000 Drachma.
Boredom - 2 SP, 1 MP, 100,000 Drachma.
Everlast Destruction - 5 SP, 4 MP and 500,000 Drachma.

Mind Is A Dangerous Place - 2 SP, 1 KP and 130,000 Drachma
Distant Dream - 3 SP, 3 MP and 400,000 Drachma
Time to Die (Umi only) - 1 SP, 1 MP and 100,000 Drachma
Tathagata Enters the Arena - 2SP 1MP 250,000 Drachma
Queen of Beauty (Umi only) - 2 SP, 2 MP and 200,000 Drachma - 2 SP, 1 MP and 100,000 Drachma
Advent of the Arena Idols - 2 SP, 1 MP and 100,000 Drachma
Triple Demon Girls (just Umi) - 2 SP, 1 MP and 150,000 Drachma
Weapon 1: Timeless Battles - 4 SP, 4 MP and 600,000 Drachma
Human World Trip - 7 SP, 5 MP and 500,000 Drachma.

• 1st Magic Theory Class ~ 2 SP and 1 MP
  
• 1st Elemental Magic Class ~ 2 SP and 1 MP
  
• 1st Combat Class ~ 2 SP and 1 MP
  
• 1st Healing Class ~ 1 SP
  
• 1st Magical Species Class ~ 2 SP and 2 MP
  
• 1st Barrier Construction Class ~ 1 SP and 1 MP
  

Skills & Disciplines:

Ocean Spirit Form
Description: Surrendering his body and soul to the Ultimate Spirit of Water, he can change his bodies shape into water and becomes indestructible. Constantly regenerating slowly saps his magic and increase his madness level, it also takes longer to regenerate the more he uses it.

SUPER ESP
Description: Basic cognitive magic to perceive the outside world. Comparatively mundane, but important as a foundation. As the name implies, ESP is simply an extension on the normal senses of sight, smell, etc. which work by feeling changes through a medium. Some examples are: detecting specific types of magic, recognizing intruders in a specific area, detecting outside surveillance, seeing through illusions

Spell Delay: Intermediate
Description: This mage has the ability to delay up to 3 spells for up to 5 posts before losing them. Requires additional incantations to use, and must be set up beforehand.

Broom Mage
Description: This mage has the ability to ride a broom and can perform various broom maneuvers when on one.

Magic Name: White Magic
Magic Type: Defensive/Support
Magic Description: A type of magic the heals strengthens and improves allies an allies condition. Lacks any offensive magic.
TP/KP Earned: 0|55
Techniques: 65/65

Cura - (4)
Type: Support
Incantation: Tui Gratia Jovis Gratia Sit, Cura
Range: Direct Contact
Effect:A very basic healing magic effective on bruises, sprains, scratches, and cuts, and depending on the mage’s ability, scorches and frostbite. However, it cannot treat damage from powerful offensive magic.

Refectio - (3)
Type: Support
Incantation:
Range: 1-5 Meters
Effect:A simple magic of refreshment and recovery from exhaustion. A scented flower as a catalyst to achieve this effect.

Paries (9)
Type: Defense
Range:Self/1-10 meters
Incantation: Paries Maxima
Description: Conjures powerful anti-material and anti-magic barriers, at this level it creates three barriers. With the use of the word "Extendetum" it can be moved remotely to block other attacks, if not, they remain around Umi at all times. Lasts for 13 posts before it loses effect.

Sanare (9)
Type: Support
Incantation: Agite jovis alatum!
Range: 1-10 Meters
Description: A high level healing spell, it creates a field of healing magic that can heal multiple people at a time, can heal even the most severe of injuries.

Renovere (8)
Type: Support
Incantation: Agite jovis manus!
Range: Direct Contact
Description: A high level status curing spell, it manifests itself as a magical array that removes diseases, conditions and negative magic.

Dolere Confirmarum (7)
Type: Support
Range: Direct Touch
Incantation: Jovis corpus, precari nos dare nostrum sociae cum confirmare
Description: An enhancement spell Umi came up with, add +14 to the strength stat. Can be used on up to 4 people for 7 turns

Dolere Properum (6)
Type: Support
Range: Direct Touch
Incantation: Jovis corpus, precari nos dare nostrum sociae cum propere
Description: An enhancement spell Umi came up with, add +12 to the speed stat. Can be used by up to three people for 7 posts.

Dolere Tolerum (7)
Type: Support
Range: Direct Touch
Incantation: Jovis corpus, precari nos dare nostrum sociae cum tolere
Effect: An enhancement spell Umi came up with, add +14 to the endurance stat. Can be used on up to four people for 7 posts

Spirit of Telekinesis (1)
Type: Support
Range: 1~150 M
Incantation: Not written yet...
Description: A pinnacle of basic magic, summons a minor spirit of telekinesis to move things freely without my control. Cannot attack and is too weak to withstand a single attack.

Spirit of Magic Sensing (1)
Type: Support
Range: 1~200 M
Incantation: Not written yet..
Description: A pinnacle of basic magic, summons a minor spirit of ESP that can detect magic around it within 200 meters. Cannot attack and is too weak to withstand a single attack.

Vertere (2)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Incantation: Vertere!
Description: A type of illusion magic that can transform the person into any shape of form they want. The do not have it's abilities and the spell can be broken rather easily.

Sagitta Magica (2)
Type: Attack
Range: 1-30 Meters
Incantation: [Number] Spiritus Undiales, Coentes Sagittet Inimicum, Sagitta Magica, [version] Undinis
Description: A rudimentary battle spell that summons minor elemental spirits to attack opponents. The water version staunches its opponents speed and strength, but cannot at this level.


Undans Paries Aquarius (5)
Type: Defense
Range: 1-20 Meters
Incantation: N/A
Description: An anti-physical instant water wall capable of stopping a ten ton truck, has the power to counter fire spells and drought. Because its instant, it only lasts for a short time (a turn), but can defend against fire spells 1 rank and up.

Ryu-gu-jo Form 3:Telepathic Channel(2)
Type:Support
Range: 1-100M's
Incantation: Ryu-gu-jo Form 3
Description: An extension on basic telepathy, allowing up to five people to communicate through a telepathic channel, however the caster is required to be a transceiver to all the thoughts that are being shared.


Name: The Kuroringyo (Black Bell Fish)
Type: Remodeled Smuggling Ship
Description: The fish ship Paru has, but black
Specs:
* Length / Width / Height: 52.6m x 18m x 19m
* Gross Weight: 18.6t
* Crew Capacity: 12
* Highest Speed: Mach 1.2
* Propulsion System: High-Output 18-Prayer Spirit Engine x2
* Armament:Mouth Spirit Cannonx1, Anti-Personal Gunsx2,All-Purpose Barrier
Areas:
*3 Bedrooms (4 Bunks)
*1 Bathroom
*Kitchen
*Common Quarters
*Area for Magic Diorama
Cost: 10,000,000 (Take it out of Yoko's Al's, Mine and if thats not enough, from Kitty) If you take the money from the trip and missions, we should have enough

Any chance you could list the loopholes and time limits on becoming water. Maybe if he spends to much time in pure water form he begins to lose his sense of self and may die/ lose all his memories.

Well technically, it's on all the time because i no longer have a physical body, but Sealing, Anti-Spirit and Lightning magic should do damage, and of course im being Mind Controlled right now, so the madness problem is always occurring.

Well, that's fine by me... But, to even it out, you should make it less broken. The ocean transformation that is.

Edit: Oh wait, since shinemeiryu stuff is a slaying thing, would shinemeiryu(sp?) techniques work?

Yes it does

How about to make it even you just make it so that unaided physical attacks don't work but anything magical or ki-related does?

How about now??

That's good, 1/2 approval.

Kyaaaa! Approved, 2/2! Looks good to me, at least!

Welcome back, Umi!

I noticed that you have a rank 10 barrier spell there.

I can see WHY you did it. But I think that you are pretty much trying to cheat the system.

So, until we can fix this, you may not use the spell Paries (5x2=10).

This is what I suggest you do.

Split it into two spells. Because if they are both at rank 5 strength, logically this spell would need to actually be rank 10, which you do not have a high enough intelligence for. So, again logically, removing half of the effect would make this a rank 5 spell.

Which would then leave you 5 MP with which you could make the remaining barrier.

... Layin' down the law.

I takes twice the time to create, so it is a Rank 5 spell i use twice, but its frim negima, and thats how they divide them up. They're two facets of the same type of spell that can work together, and LOGICALLY THEY WOULD STILL BE THE SAME SPELL

They are two different barriers. Meaning two different spells. That does not make it a rank ten spell just because you use both of them. So, split them up. Or Alternatively, just get rid of the (5+5=10). The way I see it, rank 10 is proportionally better than a rank 5 spell, better than two of them.

Not quite, since most people (other than Larita, cause i wrote her Limes Aeriales spell) have barriers that block any attack, mine do the same thing.......but retaliation is an awful color on you...

Ill take 2 mp of each, making it RANK 8 (which i can have) and then ill keep the two other Mp to save for another spell

That was pretty much the goal of my ranting. When you fix it you can use it again.

I still have the greatest defense on the forum....
and im still getting you buffs nerfed....

Umi just either: separate the spell, put the rank as 5 and 5, so that proves the spell isn't rank 10.