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Name: Alexis Young
Nickname: Alice after the time she had to play Alice in Alice in Wonderland.
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height:5ft 3
Weight: 105-106 pounds
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Neutral
Blood-type: B
Likes: Peace, Sweets, Books, Nature, Archery, Darts, those little cozy cafes you find in Europe, people who are overshadowed, neutral people, calm people, people who don't bother her, Classical Music, Tchaikovsky and Beethoven
Dislikes: Chaos, War, Bitter things, Crazy People, Annoying People, People who think they are the best, Fire, Swimming, Fighting, Rock music and Bees.
Fears: The Dark, death, War, and the Dark Evangeline ( and all those scary people.)
Physical Description: Alice has short hair tied in a small ponytail. Her hair is golden blond and her eyes are blue. Alice is frail and skinny due to her habits.
Magic Keywords:Deus Vis, Succuro mihi
Ki or Magic?Magic
Clothing:A black cap with white front. On the white front is a gold symbol. Alice usually wears a t-shirt of any random color ( depending on what she finds usually white) and jeans. The shirt is sometimes a bit too big for her but she doesn't mind. Her tennis shoes are mainly black but also has a touch of white.
Accessories: She wears a blue bracelet with gray pieces of metal connecting the the two ends of string. When in combat she carries a small green pouch that contains smoke bombs.
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Personality Alice is not antisocial no matter how much she appears one. She can make friends just fine if she wanted to but because she is a bit too absorbed in creating golems she tends to come off as strange, anti-social, emo and everything in between. She doesn't mind though as she tends to be a tad bit ignorant to what others think. She can be sarcastic when she wants to and talk too. She prefers not to be involved in any conflicts which explains why she doesn't say anything to avoid siding with a group.


History
Alexis grew up in a normal household on the mountains in a village. She originally studied elemental magic but gave up after finding a passion for golem making. Though her strength and endurance weren't the best she still had the agility to go to the forest and collect materials for the golems. The local magic school did not have that as a subject so as soon as the year ended she transferred to a different school that did. At that school she stayed in the dormitories continuing to study the arts and reading the books. From the books she learned about basic barrier magic to protect herself.

Class Golem Engineer, Puppeteer, Summoner , depends on what you call it

Weaponry/Equipment
Small throwing knives used as defensw
Magic Book to record spells to study and information
Smoke Bombs for distraction

Stats – 45
Strength:5
Accuracy:14
Endurance:6
Speed:10
Intelligence:10

Stat Points Earned: 0|0
Jewels Earned: 500,000

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Skills & Disciplines:
Things Alice are good at include darts, and art.

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TP/KP Earned: 0|0
Techniques: 7/10

Deflectio -1
Type: Barrier
Incantation: God of Peace, Protect me
Range: Up to 1 foot from the user ( actual barrier is an inch)
Effect:Creates a basic barrier, it can be varied like making it stronger by decreasing the total area of the barrier and how large it is
*insert element* Golem - 6
Type: Golem creating
Incantation: God of *element*, create a warrior
Range: 1ft in front of user at most
Effect: Creates a golem out of materials specified by type of golem. For example if Alice says " God of Wood, create a warrior, then a golem made out a wood would start generating. Depending on how much energy is put into the actual golem the stronger it is. Of course better materials require more energy but yield better results. The time it takes to create a golem also depends on how much of the golem is also made and efficiency. If the golem body is already created then it will take a shorter amount of time. Smaller golems also are easier to make, therefore taking less time. The golems created will only do what is commanded to do so and have no soul. You can however teach a golem basic spells to do and the golems will remember the spells next time you create one ( or recreate one.) Bear in mind though the efficiency of spell will not be as good as the original ( unless recreated.) Specific golems can only be used to learn specific spells. So you won't see an earth golem using a fire spell or likewise an fire golem using earth spells. Golems only can use low ranking spells and nothing else even if they are a really high rank.
Golems can be seperated into three groups, Attack, Defense, and Support. The most basic golems can only be one type though they all can be used for mundane tasks such as carrying books. Attack Golems are better for attacking and distracting. Defense are created to protect the user. Support may be useless at first but by teaching healing spells they can be a replacement healer. All golems can only use spells that fall into their category so non golems that are attack based using healing spells. Alice studies Attack Golems, has basic knowledge of Defense golems but can not use Support Golems.( last time she made one it exploded.) The golems Alice makes are usually 1ft tall and rather clunky and not fast. They are generally useless and the only things they can do are throw boulders at you. ( note Boulders are about the size of your head.) Some golems have distinction like Terra and Vera who both are kept around. Other golems are just nameless mooks used to pelt boulders at enemies. However since all (attack) earth golems know the single arrow attack spell they usually just combine it for a bigger affect. The defensive wooden golems however can only use deflectio when in a group of 10 or more making them useless. One can essentially "revive" a golem by recording the things taught and giving it to a new one. Since golems have no emotions it will feel like an exact replica.
Rank-Attack-Defense-Support
1-Single Arrow-Really Easy to break barrier-Heal small scratches
2-2 Arrows-A Stronger Boundary-Heals Cuts
3-5 Arrows- A regular deflectio- Heals Bruises
4-11 Arrows-A larger version of deflectio- Heals more than one bruise
The only difference to defense and support golems when it comes to elements is how easy it is to destroy one. For example if using a water spell against an fire golem it will be easier to destroy then say a fare spell against an water golem.
Elements for Golems Alice can use ( and which she ones she is best at)
Wood-2nd-Mainly Used for Defense
Earth-1st-Mainly used for Attack
Wind-3rd- Can create a golem the size of a yo-yo used for attack.
Spells taught to golems
Self Destruct
Golems self destruct creating a small explosion that is generally weak.
Notable Golems
Terra( original I know)
The main golem Alice uses. It is also the strongest being the only golem that can lift two rocks. That' s right two rocks. It knows the basic spell of being able to shoot mud arrows but only at the limit of 5. Alice is trying to teach it more spells but needs a person who specializes in earth magic.
Maple
The other golem Alice is seen with. It is kept around to do mundane tasks. Its only ability is to create a temporary wood barrier, which itself is not strong and can be destroyed by a single ki attack.

We would prefer if you called your Barrier Deflectio. And other than that, i like your golems Perhaps make them a little less battle-oriented, all-purpose golems will get you FAR here

I changed it up a bit to the point of three types of golem. They all can be used for mundane tasks though, is that okay?

Well I don't see anything wrong with it really.

1/2 acceptance from meh : D!

hmmm it seems like your initial golem cretion would be a rank 6 rechnique while recreating them may only be a rank four.... just whatI see though... The golem making techniques seem a little overpowered right now. Starting characters are supposed to be weak but after a while they can become very strong.

Personally I would like to see a different technique for each golem used... and I don't mean elemental affinities, those you can assignn any time to any type of golem.

I mean a technique for offensive golems, defensive golems and support golems, they would all have the subset of utility though.... that sound fair to you?

Does this seem more balanced?

What exactly does the X next to the two represent?

Sorry that was supposed to mean 2 through X where X is maximum rank golem one can make. For Alice though it is more 2 through 5

Well you see, golems can't bemade with rank two techniques. Please direct your attention to the technique section;

https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/t278-spell-and-technique-system

Creating golems alone would be a rank 5 or 6 technique. And it seems like your golems are multi-purpose and multi-facted, more so than what a rank 5 technique can accomplish.

It seems more that you should have a separate technique for each kind of Golem. Note I said KIND. So maybe a rank five technique for an attack golems, another rank five for defense golems etc.

you don't really need a skill that lets you recreate them though because when you have a technique which allows you to make" a golem, you can really just have it follow a template and create the over and over with a few add-ons each time.

Trust me, you can get technique points really fast here so just hold off on getting all the stuff you want right away and then you can work towards it. How's that sound?

The recreation is used to recreate the personal golems like Terra. Still changing it up through edit.

Let me know when you finish the edits then.

Just did a while ago and got rid of the revive.

Get rid of the sensen and next to the underlined techniques write 7/10

what???? sensen? What is that?
Edit: Wait it's sentence isn't it, I'm a genius. But which sentence do you want me to erase?

Get rid of the seven next to the six and next to the underlined techniques write 7/10

Got it.

2/2

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