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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Tairus Character Modifications Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:04 pm | |
| Account Name: Crypt96 Character: TairusChange: Added MP, SP, and Drachma - Spoiler:
-2 SP, 1 MP and 50,000 Drachma -2 SP, 1 MP and 150,000 Drachma -3 SP, 2 MP and 210,000 Drachma -2 SP, 2 MP and 160,000 Drachma
Remove "Spoiler:" in profile as quoted - Spoiler:
[Dragon Blood Stone] The necklace charm that protects him from things that would normally kill him or endanger his life. (Descriptions/Effects) The crimson red, Elder Dragon Blood Stone charm on his necklace provides him with protection to keep to user alive by supporting the users life to live to its fullest potential (in Tairus' case, to live most of his 10,000+ Earth year lifespan). Spoiler: that's a damn long time... but he came from a planet where time moves faster than Earth. plus im sure his mother, who gave him the necklace would like to see him live a long life.
Dragon's Blood Give the user a boost to his immune system to to decrease the length of ailments.
Bold "Fear of Water," "Short-Tempered," and "Spell Delay" as quoted Remove "Description:" as quoted - Spoiler:
Spell Delay: Description: Tairus has the ability to delay up to 2 spells for up to 3 posts before losing them. Requires additional incantations to use, and must be set up beforehand. Short Tempered: He prefers finishing fights quickly. Slow, long fights bother him and usually bring anger to him, thus his anger make him rather unpredictable and... "mad with power" and leaves him unable to think clearly and often attacks recklessly. Fear of Water: Tai is fearful of water and swimming. That being said, he cant swim, handle boat rides without being sick and is fond of dry climates. This makes him irritated with water and can weaken him slightly.
Spell Changes - Spoiler:
Ember Hellfire - (5) Type: Offensive Incantation: Enbaherufaia! *in progress* Range: 20m Effects: The attack sends a wide flamethrower like effect that widens as it reaches farther. The more targets it hits the less damage it does to the target(s).
Ember Arrow - (4) Type: Offensive Incantation: Hi no ya! Range: 25m Effect: Using the flame generated from Ember, Tairus launches arrows of fire at the enemy. The number of arrows is equivalent to the length of the delay. The maximum number of arrows charged is 7.
Ember Fist - (4) Type: Offensive Incantation: Kasai panchi! Range: 5m Effect: Uses the flame generated from Ember to punch the enemy with a fist of fire. Damage dealt is equivalent to the length of the delay. The maximum diameter of the fire charged is 50cm.
Stat changes - Spoiler:
Stats - 54 Strength: 12 Accuracy: 10 Endurance: 15 Speed: 11 Intelligence: 6
Sources: Where am I?Dragon TrainingJourney to TharsisA New Face (Open to 1)
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:45 am | |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:53 am | |
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Daisuke
Posts : 1468 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Position Lock On
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:07 am | |
| -Modifications Semi-Completed- Total of 9SP, 6MP and 570,000 Drachma have been confirmed and added to the profile. Stats have been changed. Spoiler have been removed. Skills & Disciplines have been bold "Description:" in Spell Delay in Skills & Disciplines Removed. Ember Hellfire technique added however not available yet therefore stroked in profile for the time being. Discussion: Rank of Ember Arrow and Ember First have not been reduced Technique, Ember Hellfire |
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Daisuke
Posts : 1468 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Position Lock On
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:38 am | |
| For the discussion, is it alright to reduced the rank 5 Ember Arrow and Ember Fist to rank 4? This is a rare case or at least to me that is so what are the other mod's opinions?
Next, about Ember Hellfire. Perhaps the incantation should be slightly lengthened. The Range should most probably be shortened. My suggestion for now would be 15:20:25 instead since I never know when you might add another charge into it incressing the range again.
Speaking of the charge, I've a little suggestion whereby Tairus has to be highly vulnerable during his charge. Anyone up to this suggestion? |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Sun Nov 27, 2011 7:27 pm | |
| yes he is open to attacks while he is charging. i just thought it was obvous. but Tai was always away from battle or only used his first charge when attacking and waits for his opponent to be down or letting others attack the enemy else to go to higher charges...
and Ember Hellfire needs a longer incantation?
i will look up some extensions for the current one... i am sorry if it didnt meet requirements...
and the range is just was i looked up for an average flamethrower in the army so i threw it in. if it need to be shortened then i will think and talk about it with others...
the down grade for the other 2 moves are because Tai had a slight overpowerness and i thought it would be right to downgrade them...
nobody's perfect so lets hear some ways to fix this up a bit! :) |
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Lyon
Posts : 640 Join date : 2011-02-01 Age : 31 Location : Close to my computer
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:21 pm | |
| Almost every character on this forum has some sort of overpowered type ability/abilities. I wouldn't worry about downgrading abilities. |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:21 pm | |
| ok then. lets keep the spells the same and find ways to fix the move i am trying to add. what needs to be done to fix the move Ember Hellfire which in japanese is translated in many ways but i chose "Enbaherufaia" because it was the easiest to remember. but if extra incantations are needed then i will try to cram some japanese in there...
and maybe to change the ember hellfire rank to 5 aswell would be appreciated. i didnt know i had 16 stat points...
and maybe there are suggestions to the incantation changes:
1. Enbaherufaiabureizu (Ember Hellfire Blaze) 2. Enbaherufaia kogeki (Ember Hellfire Attack) 3. any others you can help me think of and ill translate it to japanese or you can translate by google translate. either/or is fine.
idk how big you guys want it... |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Tue Nov 29, 2011 3:34 am | |
| - Daisuke wrote:
-Modifications Semi-Completed- Total of 9SP, 6MP and 570,000 Drachma have been confirmed and added to the profile. Stats have been changed. Spoiler have been removed. Skills & Disciplines have been bold "Description:" in Spell Delay in Skills & Disciplines Removed.
Ember Hellfire technique added however not available yet therefore stroked in profile for the time being.
Discussion: Rank of Ember Arrow and Ember First have not been reduced Technique, Ember Hellfire dramcha not added yet and sources not added! damn im bout to it myself so you wont be bothered and i wont hafta wait... |
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Daisuke
Posts : 1468 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Position Lock On
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:03 am | |
| The incantation is useless anyways but I thought a single word incantation was more for basic spells.
So ya' want Ember Hellfire to Rank 5? Update the first post then.
A rank 5 is overpowered?! It most probably still is even by deranking it... Beside i've sometimes seen a low rank spells sounding more greater than higher rank spells. Its already a mess but seems like we're lazy to fix it up... 'for now'?
Sources and Drachma added anyhow. Somehow I left out the drachma and forgotten the sources was there... I should check all the profiles sooner or later again ==" |
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B★RS Admin
Posts : 647 Join date : 2010-12-22 Age : 28 Location : Admin Panel
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:55 am | |
| Will needs to make a Spell Rank Tier.. cause no one knows how powerful a silent, short (one word or up to like five), or full incantation is when compared to each-other. Like, is a Full (about ten or more words) Incantation Rank 5 Spell beat a No Incantation Rank 6, are they even, about the same, etc. ? No one knows.
btw ~ this post has nothing to do with this topic |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:25 am | |
| the incantation is in japanese and japanese sometimes like to fuse words to make it one. sorta like: wassup or sup being what is up. and stuff like that but japanese do it grammatically correct in their language or other... i saw a 4 word incantation in english to be one big japanese word and "Arrow of fire" or "Fire Arrow" (i forgot which) is "Hi no ya" to make it super short...Ember: "Enba" + Hellfire: "Herufaia" = Enbaherufaia! yay! i could add "-en" to make it Ember Hellfire Blaze: "Enbaherufaia-en". |
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Daisuke
Posts : 1468 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Position Lock On
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:46 am | |
| Anyways no deranking for now and you can still upgrade the rank if you want of Ember Hellfire to 5, just edit your first post like said earlier.
Also, just make up a sort of phrase and use a translator or something to get the incantation.
I still don't understand how your charges work but if possible I'd prefer if you'd only have 1 range in each technique.
Also "Leaves burns on Tairus if the he has below 12 strength." in Ember Hellfire, wasn't neccessary...If you insist to have it, I'll make the conditions for you instead. |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Thu Dec 01, 2011 3:02 am | |
| i didnt think it would take this long to approve the move and i have used it in the past and i made it burn Tai when he used it like a punishment for using something above rank |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:22 am | |
| Is this done? None of the others seem to be. |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:20 pm | |
| it was...
i think the site lost the time it was done... but i revamped my character.
so my moves have changed. |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:45 pm | |
| So I can do the modification or...? :P |
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Crypt96
Posts : 404 Join date : 2011-07-24 Age : 31 Location : Equestria
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Tue Mar 05, 2013 2:49 pm | |
| you you told me to revamp, i took out the old skills and put in new ones... im a char mod so i just did it... ill show you the old and new to compare if you want. but this post was long forgotten. you just revived it from the dead. :3 |
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TheWill Admin
Posts : 4808 Join date : 2010-01-25 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Tairus Character Modifications Wed Mar 06, 2013 12:14 am | |
| If you already added the changes to your thread (you're not supposed to but oh well ), then lock it and move it to the finished applications. :P |
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